Jumat, 23 Oktober 2009

NARRATIVE STORY

SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS MOVIE





On a sunny morning Mr.Krap, Spongebob, Squidward, and Patrick gathered at the restaurant Krusty Krab. They are enjoying kraby patty, special menu in restaurant Krusty Krab.
Suddenly King Neptune came with his daughter, Princess Mindi. King Neptune loses his crown, and he heard from the plankton that the crown was stolen by Mr. Krab. Without hearing an explanation from Mr. Krab, King Neptune accused Mr. Krab who stole his crown.
"You are stealing my crown?" King Neptune said.
Mr. Krab shocked and tried to explain it.
"I do not know if your crown is missing," said Mr. Krab.
Mr. Krap kept trying to explain but King Neptune's still not believe it. Finally, King Neptune bewitching Mr. Krab became ice and will be destroyed.
Spongebob with Patrick came and shouted, "No!"
Spongebob with his best pal Patrick stands by his boss. They sets out on a treacherous mission to Shell City to reclaim the crown and save Mr. Krab’s life.
“ Well, if you really want to find my crown”, said King Neptune .
King Neptune was given for six days to find it. If they not met it, Mr. Krab will be destroyed.

Before sets out on a treacherous mission to Shell City, Spongebob asked Patrick,
" Were you want to accompany me went to Shell City found King Neptune's crown?"
Patrick asked, “ I would help you ”. Spongebob very pleased. Then they started going to Shell City.
On the way, they did not know that they followed the Princess Mindy. Princess Mindi meet them and she gave them provide air bag. They used it return to the sea. Their journey through a long, long time, and requires courage.

After six day journey, through a long journey, heavy and exhausting, they eventually got Neptune's crown in Shell City.
Now, they will returned to Bikini Bottom. But, they still followed by criminals who want to kill them. They tried come home by using air bags, but air bags had been opened Patrick.
" How we can come home to help Mr.Krab?" Spongebob said.
They are confused what to do, while they are still followed by criminals who killed them. Without them knowing it, they were near the man. They were afraid, if people were going to catch them.
The man said, “ I'm not going to catch you, but I will help you. ”
“ Really ???”, asked them.
Then, a man would take them to Bikini Bottom. They asked the man to swim faster, so they arrived at Bikini Bottom on time.
They came in Bikini Bottom. When entering the Krusty Krab, King Neptune was ready to destroyed Mr. Krab.
" Wait! I have brought your crown. Please released Mr. Krab!" said Spongebob.
King Neptune and Mr. Krab very pleased . Finally, Mr. Krab not be destroyed.
And the end, they lived happily every after.

Adapted from : GLOBAL TV






THE GENERIC STRUCTURE :

1. Title : The Spongebob SquarePants
2. Orientation : On a sunny morning Mr.Krap, Spongebob, Squidward, and Patrick gathered at the restaurant Krusty Krab. They are enjoying kraby patty, special menu in restaurant Krusty Krab.
3. Complication : Suddenly King Neptune came with his daughter, Princess Mindi. King Neptune loses his crown, and he heard from the plankton that the crown was stolen by Mr. Krab. Without hearing an explanation from Mr. Krab, King Neptune accused Mr. Krab who stole his crown.
4. Resolution : Spongebob with his best pal Patrick stands by his boss. They sets out on a treacherous mission to Shell City to reclaim the crown and save Mr. Krab’s life.
5. Complication : They still followed by criminals who want to kill them.
6. Resolution : Then, a man would take them to Bikini Bottom. They asked the man to swim faster, so they arrived at Bikini Bottom on time.
7. Complication : When entering the Krusty Krab, King Neptune was ready to destroyed Mr. Krab.
8. Resolution : " Wait! I have brought your crown. Please released Mr. Krab!" said Spongebob.
9. Reorientation : And the end, they lived happily every after.

1 komentar:

smansa mengatakan...

Score: B. Good work !

Note:
- Mind your tenses and spelling
- insert more relevant pictures

Mr. T

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